Half Term Homework- Feedback.

For our homework we had to find 10 different people to give us feedback on our rough cut music video.

Person 1: I feel that you need more camera angles in your video because it would make it a more interesting watch for the viewer.
Person 2: I think that you need a bigger variety of locations when your band is playing because it gives the video more depth and realism.
Person 3: You need more footage of the girl being stood up because it helps to make the audience feel sorry for her, and convey the narrative.
Person 4: Get more footage for your final video as their were gaps in the video.
Person 5: Try to match their outfits with the type of music their singing, because it helps to give the video a more realistic effect.
Person 6: The main singer in the group is sometimes hard to see what he is saying. If you change this im sure it will give a much better effect.
Person 7: When the girl is sat on the bench she seems to be sat on some sort of carrier bag. It doesn't look right and i don't think you would see it in a music video on TV.
Person 8: I also think you need more angles from the camera and the musician.
Person 9: I feel that you need more people appearing in the video. The videos we see on television at the moment there are a lot more than four people in on video.
Person 10: When you are filming, try to keep all the band members in shot, or have one at a time maybe? but when a band member goes out of shot, then enters again randomly it gives the video an ammeter effect.

All this feedback has been really helpful for me to try and make a professional music video. I have learnt that we need to take more footage to give a more professional feel, we need to a new location to film in to try and give the video more depth. Bit on the whole i will be trying to amend all the feedback from my friends and family to try and create a more professional music video.